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From 8024d124113c74acb13775ac86c7dc6489c4e843 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Robert Gionea <robert@gionea.com>
Date: Mon, 28 Dec 2020 22:30:16 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Refine Mnesia guide Chapter 1

---
 lib/mnesia/doc/src/Mnesia_chap1.xml           | 21 +++++++++----------
 lib/mnesia/info                               |  2 +-
 .../sys_arch_intro.xml                        |  2 +-
 3 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)

diff --git a/lib/mnesia/doc/src/Mnesia_chap1.xml b/lib/mnesia/doc/src/Mnesia_chap1.xml
index fd78d01ab4..6e66132a52 100644
--- a/lib/mnesia/doc/src/Mnesia_chap1.xml
+++ b/lib/mnesia/doc/src/Mnesia_chap1.xml
@@ -32,13 +32,13 @@
 <rev>C</rev>
 <file>Mnesia_chap1.xml</file>
 </header>
- The <c>Mnesia</c> application provides a heavy duty real-time
+ The <c>Mnesia</c> application provides a heavy-duty real-time
 distributed database.
 
 <section>
 <title>Scope</title>
 This User's Guide describes how to
- build <c>Mnesia</c> database applications, and how to integrate
+ build <c>Mnesia</c>-backed applications, and how to integrate
 and use the <c>Mnesia</c> database management system with
 OTP. Programming constructs are described, and numerous
 programming examples are included to illustrate the use of
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@
 </item>
 <item><seealso marker="Mnesia_chap2">Getting Started</seealso>
 introduces <c>Mnesia</c> with an example database. Examples
- are included how to start an Erlang session, specify a
+ are included on how to start an Erlang session, specify a
 <c>Mnesia</c> database directory, initialize a database
 schema, start <c>Mnesia</c>, and create tables. Initial
 prototyping of record definitions is also discussed.
@@ -64,29 +64,29 @@
 </item>
 <item><seealso marker="Mnesia_chap4">Transactions and Other Access Contexts</seealso>
 describes the transactions properties that make <c>Mnesia</c> into
- a fault tolerant, real-time distributed database management
+ a fault-tolerant, real-time distributed database management
 system. This section also describes the concept of locking
 to ensure consistency in tables, and "dirty
- operations", or short cuts, which bypass the transaction system
+ operations", or shortcuts, which bypass the transaction system
 to improve speed and reduce overheads.
 </item>
 <item><seealso marker="Mnesia_chap5">Miscellaneous Mnesia
 Features</seealso> describes features that enable the
 construction of more complex database applications. These
 features include indexing, checkpoints, distribution and fault
- tolerance, disc-less nodes, replication manipulation, local
+ tolerance, disc-less nodes, replica manipulation, local
 content tables, concurrency, and object-based programming in
 <c>Mnesia</c>.
 </item>
 <item><seealso marker="Mnesia_chap7">Mnesia System
 Information</seealso> describes the files contained in the
 <c>Mnesia</c> database directory, database configuration data,
- core and table dumps, as well as the important subject of
- backup, fall-back, and disaster recovery principles.
+ core and table dumps, as well as the functions used for
+ backup, restore, fallback, and disaster recovery.
 </item>
 <item><seealso marker="Mnesia_chap8">Combine Mnesia with
- SNMP</seealso> is a short section that outlines <c>Mnesia</c>
- integrated with SNMP.
+ SNMP</seealso> is a short section that outlines
+ the integration between <c>Mnesia</c> and SNMP.
 </item>
 <item><seealso marker="Mnesia_App_A">Appendix A: Backup
 Callback Interface</seealso> is a program listing of the
@@ -110,4 +110,3 @@
 database management systems.
 </section>
 </chapter>
-
diff --git a/lib/mnesia/info b/lib/mnesia/info
index bfd0816a62..2fc77fc444 100644
--- a/lib/mnesia/info
+++ b/lib/mnesia/info
@@ -1,2 +1,2 @@
 group: dat Database Applications
-short: A heavy duty real-time distributed database
+short: A heavy-duty real-time distributed database
diff --git a/system/doc/system_architecture_intro/sys_arch_intro.xml b/system/doc/system_architecture_intro/sys_arch_intro.xml
index e8ada6427b..f04e7a7879 100644
--- a/system/doc/system_architecture_intro/sys_arch_intro.xml
+++ b/system/doc/system_architecture_intro/sys_arch_intro.xml
@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@
 Database Management.
 <list type="bulleted">
 <item>QLC Query language support for Mnesia DBMS.</item>
- <item>Mnesia A heavy duty real-time distributed database.</item>
+ <item>Mnesia A heavy-duty real-time distributed database.</item>
 <item>ODBC ODBC database interface.</item>
 </list>
 </item>
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