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From f5cf1840e6b491512d545037cc2cf4189ec79907 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lars Eric Olsson <lars@eric-olsson.com>
Date: Fri, 15 May 2020 13:57:02 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] Fix various small typos in the OTP Design Principles

---
 system/doc/design_principles/applications.xml |  8 +++----
 system/doc/design_principles/des_princ.xml    |  7 +++---
 system/doc/design_principles/events.xml       |  7 +++---
 .../design_principles/release_handling.xml    | 13 +++++-----
 .../design_principles/release_structure.xml   |  9 ++++---
 system/doc/design_principles/statem.xml       | 24 +++++++++----------
 system/doc/design_principles/sup_princ.xml    |  7 +++---
 7 files changed, 35 insertions(+), 40 deletions(-)

diff --git a/system/doc/design_principles/applications.xml b/system/doc/design_principles/applications.xml
index f576701051..32e4de237d 100644
--- a/system/doc/design_principles/applications.xml
+++ b/system/doc/design_principles/applications.xml
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ stop(_State) ->
 <list>
     <item><c>Application</c>, an atom, is the name of the application.
       The file must be named <c>Application.app</c>.</item>
-    <item>Each <c>Opt</c> is a tuple <c>{Key,Value}</c>, which define a
+    <item>Each <c>Opt</c> is a tuple <c>{Key,Value}</c>, which defines a
       certain property of the application. All keys are optional.
       Default values are used for any omitted keys.</item>
 </list>
@@ -187,7 +187,7 @@ ch_app:stop([])</code>
       <section>
           <title>Directory Structure Guidelines for a Development Environment</title>
           <p>Any directory structure for development will suffice as long as the released directory structure
-              adhere to the <seealso marker="#app_dir_released">description below</seealso>,
+              adheres to the <seealso marker="#app_dir_released">description below</seealso>,
               but it is encouraged that the same directory structure
               also be used in a development environment. The version number should be omitted from the
               application directory name since this is an artifact of the release step.
@@ -236,7 +236,7 @@ ch_app:stop([])</code>
               should target the <c>priv/lib</c> or <c>priv/bin</c> directories.</p>
           <p>The <c>priv</c> directory holds assets that the application needs during runtime. Executables should
               reside in <c>priv/bin</c> and dynamically-linked libraries should reside in <c>priv/lib</c>. Other assets
-              are free to reside within the <c>priv</c> directory but it is recommended it does so in a structured manner.</p>
+              are free to reside within the <c>priv</c> directory but it is recommended they do so in a structured manner.</p>
           <p>Source files from other languages that generate Erlang code, such as ASN.1 or Mibs, should be placed
               in directories, at the top level or in <c>src</c>, with the same name as the source language, for example
               <c>asn1</c> and <c>mibs</c>. Build artifacts should be placed in their respective language directory,
@@ -312,7 +312,7 @@ ch_app:stop([])</code>
       processes is the <em>application controller</em> process,
       registered as <c>application_controller</c>.</p>
     <p>All operations on applications are coordinated by the application
-      controller. It is interacted through the functions in
+      controller. It is interacted with through the functions in
       the module <c>application</c>, see the <c>application(3)</c>
       manual page in Kernel. In particular, applications can be
       loaded, unloaded, started, and stopped.</p>
diff --git a/system/doc/design_principles/des_princ.xml b/system/doc/design_principles/des_princ.xml
index 76ac6a0c99..f46532c3f2 100644
--- a/system/doc/design_principles/des_princ.xml
+++ b/system/doc/design_principles/des_princ.xml
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
       Licensed under the Apache License, Version 2.0 (the "License");
       you may not use this file except in compliance with the License.
       You may obtain a copy of the License at
- 
+
           http://www.apache.org/licenses/LICENSE-2.0
 
       Unless required by applicable law or agreed to in writing, software
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
       WITHOUT WARRANTIES OR CONDITIONS OF ANY KIND, either express or implied.
       See the License for the specific language governing permissions and
       limitations under the License.
-    
+
     </legalnotice>
 
     <title>Overview</title>
@@ -193,7 +193,7 @@ handle_cast({free, Ch}, Chs) ->
     <p>In <c>ch1.erl</c> and <c>ch2.erl</c> above, the implementation
       of <c>channels/0</c>, <c>alloc/1</c>, and <c>free/2</c> has been
       intentionally left out, as it is not relevant to the example.
-      For completeness, one way to write these functions are given
+      For completeness, one way to write these functions is given
       below. This is an example only, a realistic
       implementation must be able to handle situations like running out
       of channels to allocate, and so on.</p>
@@ -288,4 +288,3 @@ free(Ch, {Alloc, Free} = Channels) ->
       <seealso marker="release_handling">Release Handling</seealso>.</p>
   </section>
 </chapter>
-
diff --git a/system/doc/design_principles/events.xml b/system/doc/design_principles/events.xml
index b5c7d53ef5..c2196c6758 100644
--- a/system/doc/design_principles/events.xml
+++ b/system/doc/design_principles/events.xml
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
       Licensed under the Apache License, Version 2.0 (the "License");
       you may not use this file except in compliance with the License.
       You may obtain a copy of the License at
- 
+
           http://www.apache.org/licenses/LICENSE-2.0
 
       Unless required by applicable law or agreed to in writing, software
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
       WITHOUT WARRANTIES OR CONDITIONS OF ANY KIND, either express or implied.
       See the License for the specific language governing permissions and
       limitations under the License.
-    
+
     </legalnotice>
 
     <title>gen_event Behaviour</title>
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@
       event handlers. For example, an event manager for handling errors
       can by default have a handler installed, which writes error
       messages to the terminal. If the error messages during a certain
-      period is to be saved to a file as well, the user adds another
+      period are to be saved to a file as well, the user adds another
       event handler that does this. When logging to the file is no
       longer necessary, this event handler is deleted.</p>
     <p>An event manager is implemented as a process and each event
@@ -239,4 +239,3 @@ code_change(OldVsn, State, Extra) ->
     {ok, NewState}</code>
   </section>
 </chapter>
-
diff --git a/system/doc/design_principles/release_handling.xml b/system/doc/design_principles/release_handling.xml
index 3f2c6872f4..d23e9732fc 100644
--- a/system/doc/design_principles/release_handling.xml
+++ b/system/doc/design_principles/release_handling.xml
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
       Licensed under the Apache License, Version 2.0 (the "License");
       you may not use this file except in compliance with the License.
       You may obtain a copy of the License at
- 
+
           http://www.apache.org/licenses/LICENSE-2.0
 
       Unless required by applicable law or agreed to in writing, software
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
       WITHOUT WARRANTIES OR CONDITIONS OF ANY KIND, either express or implied.
       See the License for the specific language governing permissions and
       limitations under the License.
-    
+
     </legalnotice>
 
     <title>Release Handling</title>
@@ -493,13 +493,13 @@ handle_cast({free, Ch}, Chs) ->
     <p>This file does not need to be created manually, it can be
       generated by <c>systools:make_relup/3,4</c>. The relevant versions
       of the <c>.rel</c> file, <c>.app</c> files, and <c>.appup</c> files
-      are used as input. It is deducted which applications are to be
+      are used as input. It is deduced which applications are to be
       added and deleted, and which applications that must be upgraded
       and/or downgraded. The instructions for this are fetched from
       the <c>.appup</c> files and transformed into a single list of
       low-level instructions in the right order.</p>
     <p>If the <c>relup</c> file is relatively simple, it can be created
-      manually. It it only to contain low-level instructions.</p>
+      manually. It is only to contain low-level instructions.</p>
     <p>For details about the syntax and contents of the release upgrade
       file, see the <c>relup(4)</c> manual page in SASL.</p>
     <p><em>Example, continued from the previous section:</em> You have a
@@ -628,13 +628,13 @@ ok</pre>
     <p>The new release package now also contains version "2" of <c>ch_app</c>
       and the <c>relup</c> file:</p>
       <code type="none">
-% tar tf ch_rel-2.tar 
+% tar tf ch_rel-2.tar
 lib/kernel-2.9/ebin/kernel.app
 lib/kernel-2.9/ebin/application.beam
 ...
 lib/stdlib-1.12/ebin/stdlib.app
 lib/stdlib-1.12/ebin/beam_lib.beam
-...      
+...
 lib/sasl-1.10/ebin/sasl.app
 lib/sasl-1.10/ebin/sasl.beam
 ...
@@ -735,4 +735,3 @@ Module:config_change(Changed, New, Removed)</code>
       application callback module.</p>
   </section>
 </chapter>
-
diff --git a/system/doc/design_principles/release_structure.xml b/system/doc/design_principles/release_structure.xml
index 981886282a..9e2e8df9c6 100644
--- a/system/doc/design_principles/release_structure.xml
+++ b/system/doc/design_principles/release_structure.xml
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
       Licensed under the Apache License, Version 2.0 (the "License");
       you may not use this file except in compliance with the License.
       You may obtain a copy of the License at
- 
+
           http://www.apache.org/licenses/LICENSE-2.0
 
       Unless required by applicable law or agreed to in writing, software
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
       WITHOUT WARRANTIES OR CONDITIONS OF ANY KIND, either express or implied.
       See the License for the specific language governing permissions and
       limitations under the License.
-    
+
     </legalnotice>
 
     <title>Releases</title>
@@ -105,7 +105,7 @@
     <title>Generating Boot Scripts</title>
     <p><c>systools</c> in the SASL application includes tools to
       build and check releases. The functions read the <c>rel</c> and
-      <c>.app</c> files and performs syntax and dependency checks.
+      <c>.app</c> files and perform syntax and dependency checks.
       The <c>systools:make_script/1,2</c> function is used to generate
       a boot script (see System Principles):</p>
     <pre>
@@ -130,7 +130,7 @@ ok</pre>
 Erlang (BEAM) emulator version 5.3
 
 Eshell V5.3  (abort with ^G)
-1> 
+1>
 =PROGRESS REPORT==== 13-Jun-2003::12:01:15 ===
           supervisor: {local,sasl_safe_sup}
              started: [{pid,&lt;0.33.0>},
@@ -320,4 +320,3 @@ $ROOT/...
     </section>
   </section>
 </chapter>
-
diff --git a/system/doc/design_principles/statem.xml b/system/doc/design_principles/statem.xml
index 8158416fb1..2d6ea27635 100644
--- a/system/doc/design_principles/statem.xml
+++ b/system/doc/design_principles/statem.xml
@@ -1095,7 +1095,7 @@ open(cast, {button,_}, Data) ->
       This is not important if you do not postpone events.
       But if you later decide to start postponing some events,
       then the design flaw of not having separate states
-      when they should be, might become a hard to find bug.
+      when they should be, might become a hard-to-find bug.
     </p>
 
     <section>
diff --git a/system/doc/design_principles/sup_princ.xml b/system/doc/design_principles/sup_princ.xml
index 7fb8ba39ea..60ec23466f 100644
--- a/system/doc/design_principles/sup_princ.xml
+++ b/system/doc/design_principles/sup_princ.xml
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
       Licensed under the Apache License, Version 2.0 (the "License");
       you may not use this file except in compliance with the License.
       You may obtain a copy of the License at
- 
+
           http://www.apache.org/licenses/LICENSE-2.0
 
       Unless required by applicable law or agreed to in writing, software
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
       WITHOUT WARRANTIES OR CONDITIONS OF ANY KIND, either express or implied.
       See the License for the specific language governing permissions and
       limitations under the License.
-    
+
     </legalnotice>
 
     <title>Supervisor Behaviour</title>
@@ -466,7 +466,7 @@ supervisor:delete_child(Sup, Id)</code>
       <c>Id</c> is the value associated with the <c>id</c> key in
       the <seealso marker="#spec">child specification</seealso>.</p>
     <p>As with dynamically added child processes, the effects of
-      deleting a static child process is lost if the supervisor itself
+      deleting a static child process are lost if the supervisor itself
       restarts.</p>
   </section>
 
@@ -534,4 +534,3 @@ supervisor:terminate_child(Sup, Pid)</code>
       then terminates itself.</p>
   </section>
 </chapter>
-
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